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the journey begins

January 4th, 2010, 7:33 pm

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Reply Tasher, January 4th, 2010, 8:01 pm

Ok, the plot has not been the best so far, there is little driving him to be a trainer, all we know is that he is a trainer and had not expressed much happiness from this. Try adding some backstory, and soon. Also the whole "want to be my rival" is not the best plot point. To become a rival a major even has to happen, not a casual battle. Make a major event involving the "rival" for the next few pages. There is also the fact that the speech bubbles are not the best. I learned how to make a bubble from this site. and learned many other things http://tabmok99.mortalkombatonline.com/spritecomic-tutorial.html The sizing of the sprites have been alittle off in the whole comic, i think it looked best in page 7 on the last panel. Other than that, the maps that you have made are fantastic. Ive tried to make maps before, its a daunting task, but you have made some great towns so far. It really is a comic that will help you become alot better at the art of spriting, because it is a good little project you have going. Just remember to save all pages in PNG format and you have yourself one nice looking page. Keep on making these!

Reply nousherwan, March 4th, 2010, 9:51 am

My friend has come so far in spriting..Sac,im so proud of you!

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